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20/3/2019
 Once upon a time there was a young avocado who is always getting in trouble ol the time because “he broke. a vase” and he said i was outside playing fortnite on. my tablet then i hord a smash i think it’s a ghost i am going to catch it tomorrow. (the next bay) I am going to catch it now with a jar I caught. the ghost! And i showed Mum and Dad. mum and dad said so it’s just a ghost do. this every time.

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  1. Kia ora. I am Harfateh from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked that you came up with a character thats a vegetable.
    I learnt that you can make a realistic story to imaginary.
    Maybe you could next time make a animation about the story.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Harfateh

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